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I mean no affence to you as my brother
But your all the examples, apportant as another
The poem begins in whats inside
No organs or bones, try deeper to find
It stars with me, no fence requird
But no one stood up to take there disier
I am the love in you soul
I am the care that will never need to grow
But as some in the world don't care
Then I am life in the air
I am life in human hands
But death is a sentence that we must stand
Donthate death for taking you neigbore
Love him so there is no labour
He takes them to a better place
While the one s with no soul root in hell for following dates
So to end this I must add
There is only happyness, no rage, no sad
I love you and you and even you
I love everyone as I was made to
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Ask-Yomi-Takanashi Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
This is a wonderful piece of writing. I'm glad :iconmrteenyrules: linked it to me.
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classicBH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Thanks :D
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Ask-Yomi-Takanashi Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
My pleasure.
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classicBH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Thanks for the fav aswell :D
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Ask-Yomi-Takanashi Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
It was truly my pleasure. It's really great.
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classicBH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
:D
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mrteenyrules Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great!
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classicBH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
And its true, I printed to many copys, but thanks
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mrteenyrules Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah it's still pretty neat
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classicBH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
You linked to yomi
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mrteenyrules Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. She likes poems so thought she'd like this. ^^
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classicBH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
That's good enough, she does like it
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mrteenyrules Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool.
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classicBH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Yeahz
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